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Star Bright

October 29, 2009

Star bright
Who left so suddenly
No warning
Or explanation
Did you tire of waiting
And unappreciation
Did you feel misused
Miss the exhilaration
Midnight is mourning
The soulless space
You left behind
Shooting into another universe
Thats is no longer mine

Star

4 comments

  1. Amazing. But so sad.


  2. Beautiful.
    I particularly like:
    Midnight is mourning
    The soulless space
    You left behind


  3. very poignant, makes me think of Nick Drake and others with extreme talent who left us before they were appreciated


  4. You’ve portrayed the ache of loss and uncertainty with such simplicity and beauty.



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